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Monday, October 24, 2016

ErogeQuest 2016 Part II: More C's Ware (Desire)

ErogeQuest 2016 continues! This time, I read through Desire by C's Ware.

All in all it was pretty damn good, this is more like the YU-NO I love.

Playthrough notes here: (Spoilers for Desire and YU-NO)








Desire. notes

~started Al's route~ this motherfucker literally has his name embroidered on his shirt lmao

he's into spanking, huh

Kanno's games tend to have a kind of comical tone to them when the player does something stupid, but seeing the protagonist's face contort to match that is kind of unsettling...

"What a little schoolgirl! A guy who does embroidery?"

"Don't be so sexist. A guy can do embroidery, too, if he wants."

ok it's weird that the "face changes" aren't represented on the actual center sprite, but rather in a box on the bottom right corner.
I'll accept that it's one of the first games to even HAVE face changes, and maybe technical limitations prevent storing multiple full-body sprites, but it's still offputting

seems to be the first plot-driven story from C's Ware

"What exactly are you trying to accomplish by opening your fly?"

"She's working so hard, it's almost as if her life depends on it!" (hmmmm)

oh sexy time with Christie
OH MAN IT'S KYLE
OH MAN IT'S ME NOW

THEY'RE MAKING POETRY WILL THEY FUCK LMAO

"Further I rammed towards reaching the bang, my hard prick pulsing inside the poontang"

"Like a priest does his bible when preaching at mass, I used both hands to grab her plump ass"

"Her tight quivering anus caused me to chuckle... so I slid in my finger right down to the knuckle"

Al is giving Sylvia shit for wanting to be more masculine, hmm....

"Women with a beauty like yours should express it to the fullest extent" wow

"Even if I don't want to be feminine?"

"Yes, because I really dig you." WOW

Jesus Christ he's such a fucking asshole to Sylvia -- there's no way this isn't going to end in an h-scene
WOW! I was wrong on that one, he just left

Makoto and Kyle together, I'm sure this is the appearance of the "compulsory sex" plot device

OH CHRIST, WHY IS SHE NAKED

Sheryl is the fucking best, such a bro

"Don't you read English subtitles? I told you that area is off-limits!"

ooooh the seawater is off-limits huh???

I'm glad Reiko is giving Al shit for cheating on his girlfriend

I've been switching between the PC-98 and Windows images, definitely digging the Windows images surprisingly. Just not a fan of the character designs in the PC-98 version (besides Sylvia and Sheryl)

I just noticed the sign in the building says "LABOLATORY" lol

It's still weird seeing the PC-98 images on top of the Windows interface... like how the outdoors images are in monochrome but the island map (from the Win version) is hi-res

Bio-chemical warfare + dead heroine found with chemicals in her body... is this Love Potion all over again???????

also it's kind of annoying that the music resets whenever you change location

I kinda like Kazumi's character

this game is leagues better than everything that came before it from C's Ware, they're actually talking about their feelings!!!

and there are semblances of character arcs!

Sheryl's h-scene was really awkward

#freeAl

ayy Sheryl x Sylvia catfight

HER EYES OPENED
HOLY SHIT REIKO'S EYES OPENED
SHE'S NOT DEAD???? not gonna lie that freaked me the fuck out

Al and Tina are totally alone on the island now and are living off the land... this is starting to remind me of the ending of YU-NO

What the fuck is happening???

HIS FACE IS MELTING AAAA
SHE KICKED HIM THROUGH TEH CHEST

~finished Al's route~
that was pretty fuckin good, not gonna lie
I'm getting strong YU-NO vibes here:
Man and daughter figure stuck in an area outside time, daughter sacrifices herself to save father, whole point of story is to get them reunited (or something like that)


~started Makoto's route~

she's touching herself to him, great

but I'm liking the two perspectives deal here, especially for a mystery story like this --- instead of forcing you to reread stuff to pick up on hints you missed, you get the same scenario from another perspective

I'm going to try to evaluate Makoto's route based on BOTH as an entry route and as a secondary route --- the player is allowed to start with either Al's or Makoto's route, so I want to see how the quality of the experience would change if I picked Makoto's first

the female doctor/nurse characters are always sketchy as fuck in these games, but not here for some reason --- the male doctor is bad tho

LMAO Makoto called the kid a little whore
"What's a whore?"
"(You little shithead...)"

there's a blatant double standard here --- Al's motivation is to uncover the truth, but all Makoto wants to do is fuck Al

there are also way fewer choices in Makoto's route than in Al's... in Al's route you had to investigate each item individually, with Makoto you only investigate a scene at a time. Narratively it makes sense - Al is a newcomer and also a reporter, while Makoto has no reason to inspect everything since she's been here for a long time. But I can't help feeling that Makoto's route is an afterthought compared to Al's

"She'd continue with her research even if James Bond had his prick up her ass"
Never change, translators

oh shit, Reiko and Makoto were fucking each other?
and they are now, great

OH NO, MAKOTO OVERHEARD THE RHYME FUCKING

grr Makoto's first h-scene...
#makotoDidNothingWrong
err wait I just realized that Makoto cheated on Al before she found out he was cheating on her, but I still feel sympathetic to her --- if you read both AlxChristie and ReikoxMakoto's scenes again, neither of them are really consentual... and KylexMakoto CERTAINLY isn't

oh great, blackmail now

god fucking damn it

I hate this route so much

I fucking hate this route so much

I want it to end

Is Martina really trying to say that "even if your partner cheats on you, you should trust in him because he still loves you?"

NEVERMIND, the nurse is off her fucking rocker too

i hate this route so fucking much, i can't even put it into words why

this makes me so fucking mad

the girl's route exists so the protag can be repeatedly raped and felt sorry for
this is bullshit

why can't this game treat Makoto with dignity?

~Makoto end~

this route was really kinda awful in its treatment of its protag
the ending was alright, but I can't look past the fact that Makoto fell in love with her rapist

anyway a new route opened up, maybe it's faster

~martina route start~

martina's pretty fuckin cool, not gonna lie

is she trying to revive / clone her dead daughter or something?

or maybe transport to another dimension where her daughter is still alive?

she's pretty fixated on this notion of "destiny" (運命)

Martina is the closest to a real human being in this story lol

man this is a pretty good route so far, digging the Tina and Martina dynamic

Tina's gonna be reborn?

WHAT THE FUCK IS THERE A TIME LOOP????

SHE's TINA????????

holy shit wow, you got me, game

~end of game and epilogue~

damn, that was pretty good

but we absolutely did not need Makoto's route in there at all. it did nothing for this game. It was a cool idea, but I hope it was done better in Eve ~Burst Error~.

This game is definitely a spiritual predecessor to YU-NO, though, like holy shit lmao.



So yeah. 7/10 probably. Next up is Eve ~Burst Error~!


Monday, October 3, 2016

ErogeQuest Part I: Journey Through C's Ware

Halfway because I'm interested in visual novel history and halfway because I hate myself, a few weeks ago I decided to go and read C's Wares first VNs. A rational person would immediately dismiss these games as smut and then bleach their eye holes after beholding them, but I'm not quite rational.

I know it gets better. I know this garbage culminates in YU-NO, which is alone enough motivation to push me through the slush. Surely the previous games by YU-NO's staff would have redeeming qualities, right?

Ha, ha.

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The following are my notes while reading mixed in with post-mortem evaluation. I am aware the writing devolves with time. These games have destroyed my ability to organize my thoughts.

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RECURRING THEMES / MOTIFS:
[1] Mean-spirited
[2] Lack of agency in sex scenes ('craziness', 'love pills')
[3] "Rape is something to be endured"
[4] FUCKED UP
[5] PUNISHMENT
[6] Random and "convenient" characterizations for sex scenes

-----Fatal Relations-----

So like, you move into a house with your new family after your father dies or something. The house is led by a matriarch and houses several sisters. The house is special, though. Every character wants sex with you, all the time, until it kills you. This made it pretty (unintentionally) hilarious.

Negatives:

  • Shit. Total shit.
  • Uncomfortable as fuck.   
  • I hated everyone except the maid.
  • Nothing really made sense, was the house making people crazy? Or something?
  • It invokes [1], [2], [3], [4], [5], AND [6]. Fantastic!
Positives: 
  • The ending was amazing. Everybody burned to death in a mansion fire.
  • Kinda funny in a "this is garbage" kinda way.
  • The maid was a bro.
  • It was short.

There are strong horror vibes in this game, particularly sexual horror, which is a recurring theme in C's Wares games (which is really uncomfortable). Otherwise, there's nothing really to talk about here,


-----Love Potion-----

It's all the same shtick: guy comes to all-girls school as a teacher, sex happens constantly. This time, a magic pill makes everyone go into heat. Wow!

That said, there were actually traces of goodness in here. This is Hiroyuki Kanno's entry into VN writing iirc, and you can definitely see a resemblance to YU-NO in here, namely the humor and style of writing. On top of that, the conspiracy-type plot with many moving parts. It kind of reminds me of Divi-Dead too, even though the authors aren't shared.

Still pretty bad, the ending was kind of nice though. (A happy-ish ending?)

I can see why people say that C's Ware and Kanno can only write sex-themed stories though --- even when looking at Divi-Dead and YU-NO, the sex (and, in the former, sexual horror) motifs are pretty strong. I know he can write WELL (re: YU-NO) but it would be interesting to see a... not rape-centric story before then?


-----Don't Call Me Amy-----

The translation of this game is a fucking disaster. I literally cannot even tell what's happening.
me too
Emi is a really funny character though, but that's just because I kinda like airhead characters.
The scenarios are ridiculous, and I think that might be intentional. The first story is a school life story, followed by a nurse story (lol), concluding with a maid story (LOL).
The game seems aware of this, esp considering the character commentaries between stories (something I liked actually).

The plot is highly sexual, with a bit of sexual horror.

Literally LOL'd when Tomomi got stabbed to death in the end of the second story.

THE LAWS OF NATURE LITErALLY ARE FORCING THE GIRL AND THE BOY TO BE MARRIED OR ELSE HE'S CURSED LOL

Emi was tortured as a maid, so in vengeance, she and Tomomi literally rape everybody in the house.

THE HOUSE BURNT DOWN AGAIN LOL

happy ending again

What the fuck is this stuff in the description about "two Amys" and split personalities? I literally got none of that. Did we play the same game?

EXTRAS: Fun PSA on contraception, because lol.

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Parting remarks: